katharina ...

Love this portrait! It is very soft and tender, and expression is nice! Great work by model and photographer. It conveys love in a very sensual way. Model's eyes catch viewer's attention and touch to the deepest part of the heart!
Yet I would work a little bit on the catch light on model's left (viewer's right side) eye - too distracting to my taste. And probably would make a bit smaller visually model's left (right for the viewer) part of the face. It is not covered with the hair and looks a little bit bigger than left part, so probably hiding part of it in a shadow could restore visual balance. Don't take too personal - these are just small notes after week of 24/7 retouching marathon <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>))
Your work is great and overall impression is just amazing! Congrats on the great portrait!